Friday, 17 October 2014

Quick Write 1

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I.A.L.T - create a piece of writing that tells a story by capturing a moment. This will include details about to describe the thoughts and feelings of the main character, as well as description about the environment/surroundings.

Fast as you can  - Jot down as many ideas that pop into your mind as you look at this picture? Adult,concrete,bridge
and water,railing,windmill and a kid!
Imagine you are this character. Describe this moment.
Thoughts-Oh man!
Monologue in your head-I like the cool animated hill in the background

Describe the light, shadow and water?It has been raining
and there is white light and the man's reflection in the water
What is happening?They are watching something
Look at the biker(s). Where are they heading? Where have they been?.
They have been in town and biked to the country to maybe get a view!
What happened in the moments before this. Set the scene.
Something sad happens  : l

What sound does this picture make?Swishing of the  air and water

The Picture

We bike across the wet muddy road in the cold winters morning
Then suddenly the the guy says to me ‘lets stop and look at the view’ I say ‘ yes’.
We both stop and stare at the swishing overflowed water down below hanging on to the metal railing.
They must have been staring for at least 20 minutes
watching Suddenly  it starts raining!
AHHH to shelter they ran under an arm of the pole about 2 metres long’ we will wait until it stops.
5 minutes later it stopped they saw there wet bikes OH MAN the guy said we will wait until the bikes dry then we will go home  so we walked over to the railing to see how high the water was to their astonishment it had not even moved its height!
Then the guy say a bench on a hill look he said a bench we went over to it and sat down it was not wet we could hear the swishing of grass under my feet then the man says bye he says getting on his bike i went to my bike aswell i go home in the dark it takes me halfanhour to get home it was a good day today!

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