I.A.L.T - create a piece of writing that tells a story by capturing a moment. This will include details about to describe the thoughts and feelings of the main character, as well as description about the environment/surroundings.
Fast as you can - Jot down as many ideas that pop into your mind as you look at this picture?man feeding birds,the sea,a sunset and birds flying!
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Imagine you are this character. Describe this moment.
Feelings-Happy
Thoughts-Here is some food
Monologue in your head-
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Describe the light and water?
What is happening?
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Look at the character. Where has he come from? Think about his life.
He is a hobo
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What happened in the moments before this. Set the scene.
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What sound does this picture make?Skawk skawk
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My story
He walks across the beach sooo tired from his work he walks slowly for he was old.
He sits on a bench.Birds surrounded him for he had some bread he had snuck from his work . He was poor he worked for a man in a bread company cutting the bread all day.
He did not have allot of money he did not have allot of stuff.
He lived in a shack on a beach he was lucky to have a blanket and a mattress thats all he had and boxes as chairs not much.
He fed the happy birds a bit of bread he got they flew away in joy into the sunset.
The man walked back to his shack and sits on the box he had a rich son that lived on the other side of the world in paris.
He was selfish and would not give him money.
So the man never had a shower or bath so you could imagine he stunk but he didn't care about that.
One day a chest was washed up on the beach he wondered what could be in it fish?clothes? maybe gold or silver noway .
So he found a crowbar and yanked it open there was when he couldn't believe it it was so magical was he dreaming ?
No he was not it was a heap of gold coins.Well what do u think he did with it he spent it on a cottage and food and he lived happily ever after!
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